This term Room 17 have be focusing on Descriptive writing. We have worked hard to include adjectives and similies into our work.
Here are some of our favourite pieces.
My Favourite Time of the Day
Outside the lights are flickering like a candle light trying to survive. - Ruby
As soon as my head touches the pillow I am carried to the comforts of Dreamland. I hear the trees crouching together whispering secrets.- Medha
I feel calm like the sea, quiet and peaceful. - Jesse
The clouds, slowly move like a snail flying across the sky, forming pictures in my mind. - Nilana
I hear wind howling and making loud noises and the rain falling on my roof. - Michael J
Something Fishy
Sea blue hat turtles glide by the tall strong seaweed. - Anya
Glowing white and yellow sockfish flapping calmly in the light blue sea. - Erica
The octopus drifts off with it's long heavy tentacles. - Emily
Dark blue shark with razor sharp teeth racing like thunder through the blue sea. _Micheal F
The glittering small bubbles slowly travel up to the surface while the water ripples when the fish swim through it. - Vanson
Stripy, colourful, vibrant sockfish float by flopping around like they're choking. - Max
Glowing, vibrant, zooming sockfish with big twisting legs and the biggest eyes I have ever seen. -Thea
Sea blue t-shirt octopus with long stockings going up and down like a bouncy ball going higher and higher. - Azusa
The water is getting displaced with the fish rushing through the shining water. - Cairo
The big floppy white octopus springs up like someone is on a trampoline. - Gracie
Bright sunlight shining to show the way back. -Ash
The sunlight beams in the sky and shimmers over the sea on the horizion. - Savannah
I want A Cat
I would like a lazy cat so it can just sit on my lap. I want it to sit still on it's pillow and do nothing. It would move slowly like a Grandpa. - Adi
When it runs it zooms past you and it makes your hair stick up. - Darren
Daddy Long Legs
Legs are thick and brown like rope, claws as sharp as a knife. He grapples his way around with his claws.- Oskar
It is fury and brown with a claw like a fish hook.- Tessa
Here are some of our favourite pieces.
My Favourite Time of the Day
Outside the lights are flickering like a candle light trying to survive. - Ruby
As soon as my head touches the pillow I am carried to the comforts of Dreamland. I hear the trees crouching together whispering secrets.- Medha
I feel calm like the sea, quiet and peaceful. - Jesse
The clouds, slowly move like a snail flying across the sky, forming pictures in my mind. - Nilana
I hear wind howling and making loud noises and the rain falling on my roof. - Michael J
Something Fishy
Sea blue hat turtles glide by the tall strong seaweed. - Anya
Glowing white and yellow sockfish flapping calmly in the light blue sea. - Erica
The octopus drifts off with it's long heavy tentacles. - Emily
Dark blue shark with razor sharp teeth racing like thunder through the blue sea. _Micheal F
The glittering small bubbles slowly travel up to the surface while the water ripples when the fish swim through it. - Vanson
Stripy, colourful, vibrant sockfish float by flopping around like they're choking. - Max
Glowing, vibrant, zooming sockfish with big twisting legs and the biggest eyes I have ever seen. -Thea
Sea blue t-shirt octopus with long stockings going up and down like a bouncy ball going higher and higher. - Azusa
The water is getting displaced with the fish rushing through the shining water. - Cairo
The big floppy white octopus springs up like someone is on a trampoline. - Gracie
Bright sunlight shining to show the way back. -Ash
The sunlight beams in the sky and shimmers over the sea on the horizion. - Savannah
I want A Cat
I would like a lazy cat so it can just sit on my lap. I want it to sit still on it's pillow and do nothing. It would move slowly like a Grandpa. - Adi
When it runs it zooms past you and it makes your hair stick up. - Darren
Daddy Long Legs
Legs are thick and brown like rope, claws as sharp as a knife. He grapples his way around with his claws.- Oskar
It is fury and brown with a claw like a fish hook.- Tessa